Miss You - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Alina Le Ann
Junior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 40
INDIANA

0 posted 2000-06-12 02:03 AM

Miss You

I miss you so much I really do
All this pain is real and true
It's only with you I want to be
And yes I know you too miss me

Our love was strong
Together we were for time so long
Loving you was all that mattered
Now our dreams have all been shattered

I wish we had just one more night
So you could hold me close and tight
We'd be together once again
And pray that night would never end

I need you baddly in my life
Future said I'd be your wife
Now that dream can't be found
Our wishing star is on the ground

Our clouds been pulled from the sky
Nothing to do but hurt and cry
Now I miss you way too much
Live I now, but die I for your touch

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-06-12 06:02 AM

This really has a tragic ring,
and gets me wondering:
whatever happened?

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-06-12 01:50 PM

i love your rhyming style

i do agree about one thing...it makes you wonder what happened
well, i wish you the best of luck

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-06-12 03:16 PM

Wow....deja vu...from the first line to the last. Excellent poem...I mean really...this was great. Your style and your expression of these feelings was right on the mark. I wish you the best...I know this is hell for you...just keep your eyes open...you never know what'll be thrown your way.

D.E.

Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-14 11:56 AM

excelent writing kid, if indeed this is your life, then my heart out to you.
if not then great poem anyway.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.