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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-10-13 02:56 AM


-Upon This Peak-
years ago an angel cried
just as a life sighed
angels were called to the scene
nothing was left of the being
did a second count
did a minute matter
a little one learns to speak
a little one learns to shriek
did questions mount
did they learn chatter
months ago an angel tried
while another cried
had they learned to doubt
had faith in the matter
days ago an angel died
just between new life and pride

J.L. Koehler
-Peace, Love, and Happiness Forever-


© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
1 posted 2000-10-13 10:28 PM


Wow!!! Im still at a loss for words!!

     Thank you!!

Click



sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

2 posted 2000-10-13 11:43 PM


Angels speak to us in so many different ways...nice work.

      ~Sash~


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-10-14 11:44 PM


Beautiful work here!!!  Listen to those little voices within for sometimes they are not you, they are your guardian angel.  Angels are with us all...   Loved this  

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-10-15 01:26 PM


enjoyed reading the poem, liked it and yes I believe that we have angels both earthly and heavenly.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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