Dark Poetry #2 |
A Poet's Word |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Surpassed the rest By far the best No longer will I wallow I shot the dove A flame of love So cold and dark and hollow Suddenly It seems to me I find a heart so tender From fantasy flight I steal some light With words that I will send her I'll call the moon To make her swoon And lean in my direction Then like a dart I'll take her heart To keep in my protection In a fleeting glance I have a chance To prove what I could be A poet's word Sometimes absurd Is what I'll let her see I do not jest I've passed the test And found a road to follow When life will shove I'll rise above And find the heart I swallow G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This was neither for or about anybody. It was just some thoughts passing through my mind. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i find it simply ridiculous that i am the only one that has read this and replied!! what a wonderful mind you must have if this is just floating thru it!! way to go!! i really really loved this. thanks for sharing your mind!! kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I, too, marvel at the thoughts running through your mind! Regardless, I would love to be on the receiving end of a piece as this!! Great work! Crakker |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I'd like to see what you come up with some thinking involved...great work. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Loved it! (That says it all!) ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
like tara i shall be brief..... Love it.....but more than tara hehe I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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