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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-10 02:15 AM


I am evil,
Why must you fear me?
If goodness exist,
So must I,

I do not cause harm,
So please do not be alarm,
I am here to do my job,
Your souls I do not choose to rob,

I take this task,
In your shame I do not bask,

See me as I really am
Do not think I enjoy this game.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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EagleOne
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1 posted 2000-10-10 03:15 AM


I am evil,
Why must you fear me?
If goodness exist,
So must I,

Indeed it must! You pen this from an interesting perspective.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Lady Lost
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2 posted 2000-10-10 08:47 AM


Your perception (of yourself?) is not quite the same as mine....

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Christopher
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3 posted 2000-10-10 11:49 AM


Actually- I could get into a long philosophical discussion in this - I see not so much that the evil is the entire person, as much as it is merely a necessary facet opposite the "good" side to create... a balance.



Oh - and cool!

Chris

AVANTI
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4 posted 2000-10-10 02:04 PM


intresing angle...
well written

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



Isis
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5 posted 2000-10-10 09:19 PM


Interesting possible glimpses here hon, great readings, great stuff!!  I like the way your mind works..
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



carolinadreams
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6 posted 2000-10-11 01:36 AM


i love, and i have hated
i have trusted, and can't be trusted
i taste wrong, but taste the good
i have fun with the game


Great work, I hope you didn't take offense to what I replied to. Love your imagery!



[This message has been edited by carolinadreams (edited 10-11-2000).]

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-11-03 03:21 AM


I don't think we fear the words that evil speaks...we fear the evil that men do..James
LM
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8 posted 2000-11-04 09:48 AM


Cool...  

Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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9 posted 2000-11-05 01:09 AM


Wow wow.....true true....*heard you out*
nice nice.......me likes me likes......

Keep it up!..............





"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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10 posted 2000-11-05 01:11 AM


still dig this!
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