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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
If my hopes and dreams aren't all that they seem make the best of everything and hope that it's for real All that I do is not necessarly true I've got motives too I can't explain So take me by the hand we'll make our best stand this way I know we can make it work out right Click |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. Interesting concept. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Click~~Liked this one. I really hope You two can make this work. ~A Sucker For a Happy Ending~ Sash |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
never do i tire, never do i cease of wanting to read words from click!! what a piece!! very real poem. good work. kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Lots of promise and hope for the future by each others side...nicely stated. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
So simple, yet, true. Nice piece, here. Crakker |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great.....keeping that relationship leveled is a key of keys.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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