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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Would have showered you with rose petals For the rest of time, Just to let you know That you were on my mind. Would have given you my heart Each and every beat, Just to feel your passion And your body's heat. Would have cried you an ocean Of infinite tears, To let you know losing you Was my biggest fear. Would have given you my life So you could go on, But I guess that notion Is dead and gone. For the rose petals that shower you Are from a flower who's dying, And a man's soul Which inside is loudly crying. The heart you were then given Now beats no more, A bitter chill sets in my soul From beyond this closed door. The ocean that I cry As of now is in vain, Tears of my solitude My sadness and my pain. My life indeed I gave you And look, you went on, But don't look back again For next time, I'll be gone. Jeremy T. Sellers 10/7/00 3:31 PM "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Beautiful and sad sentiments. Alas it is better to have loved and lost than to never loved at all. Somewhere, sometime you will find one who will cherish the love you have to give. |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Jeremy, wow, what a poem! I'm sorry it took me a bit to come read it, but I'm very glad I did!! There will come someone in your life that will be able to understand the love which you are so very capable of giving, and she will return it 3 fold dear! Just keep your hope up, and keep writing wonderful poetry!  hugs and love, Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is an excellent poem. I can relate all too well. .......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was outstanding, the flow was perfect. A great piece showing that sometimes no matter what we do...when it's not right....there's nothing we could ever do that would be "enough". |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Okay yeah I went digging into the past a lil. And OMG this one makes the tears flow heavily. This has got to be the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. Would have showered you with rose petals For the rest of time, Just to let you know That you were on my mind. Great work here, Jeremy!! Now where's that ring??? hahaDkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
Know this feeling unfortunately. Great job. You brought across some very hard feelings. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! I'm glad I had the chance to read this one, it's heart breaking! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
This is AMAZING!!! I just loved it... I would have... What a beautifully written piece, very enjoyable read. Take Care! |
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