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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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In the shadows of the night The darkness silently sleeps So noisy is the silence As my dreams begin to creep The shadows of the moon And the calmness of the night Bring your spirit to me Warming my body with delight Just one candle burning A flame dancing to my sighs Feeling your warm flesh In my dreams through teary eyes The illumination of your spirit Bring the whispers of the wind Seducing my thoughts Burning passions from within And in the twilight of the night As the ebony winds blow Feeling your gentle touch My dreams erotically flow Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think I am now officially a fan of your writing. This is great, it's almost as though you have seen my dreams.< !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much, that inspires me to keep writing Eagle one...thank you for peeking in  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Official fan here also, glad I went back a few days for this one. I have these kind of thoughts and dreams, the moonlight, dark passions, all of it. I am seeing a book of these little gems, should be tied with purple velvet ribbon, with satin cover. Cat... |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Victoria, After reading this piece, I think i've discovered a kindred spirit.. There is nothing like those passions that visit us in our dreams, is there? I love this one.. great job! firecrakker |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If only we could dream everynight haa..thank you for your nice comments Firecracker..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i didnt see you sneak in here catalina darlin haa..sorry for ignoring you ..thanks again for your support.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...alright Victoria how do you manage wonderful erotic dreams such as this...tell me your secret...ha..I know you never will...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If i knew James,i would make a million haa.. it would be a big seller im sure..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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