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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-04 06:14 PM


Pillows of ebony, haunt the night
bringing dark romance, pleasure and lust
voices in the wind, screaming in delight
sensations of pleasure, caress the earths crust
teardrops of ecstasy, seduce the torrid rain
patiently the misty moon, craves with desire
flowing hair in the sky, flaunts her purple mane
as the indigo winds, fans the billowy fire
sweet nectar of passion, sedates the darkness
the rapture of the night, creeps silently away
as twilight peers, removes her velvet dress
until tomorrow night, when she again can play




Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

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1 posted 2000-10-04 07:11 PM


WOW....I really dig this..I was lost in this fantasy, as it has been my own reality before.  Beautiful post.....beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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2 posted 2000-10-04 07:19 PM


Thank you Beth..for peeking in..
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3 posted 2000-10-04 10:40 PM


OHHHHHH MYYYYYY!  I don't try to come up with big words when replying to other's work.  This kicked major ass!  It was full of passion, sensuality, and shwew, that's enough foreplay for me...is it hot in here?
Great work!!!!

Jeremy

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-Edgar Allen Poe

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4 posted 2000-10-04 10:57 PM


Thank you firejerm...ill write another real soon..glad you liked..
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5 posted 2000-10-06 04:58 PM


I Love to flirt...especially if velvet dresses are involved...James
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6 posted 2000-10-06 06:17 PM


thank you James...putting on my velvet dress haa..
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7 posted 2000-10-07 10:06 AM


Another great read!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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8 posted 2000-10-07 01:15 PM


thank you Eagle one..nice of you to say  
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