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Fall (Ethans Haiku Challenge) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Striped of what life was Colorless as the nude tree Our Love is barren |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
this is excellent. expresses so much in so few words. beautiful. ive always wanted to write a haiku, what are the "rules"? shira |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
kitkat: what a magnificent haiku. i like it very much. there's so much between the lines. thanks for responding. silentsky: there are rules and an example of a haiku in the poetry challenge forum, as well as the rules of the challenge. i look forward to a response! < !signature--> Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was really good. I wrote a haiku or at least I thought it was a haiku. But it wasnt it was a senyru. But this was really good. Thanks for sharing it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks for the nice replies. I find haiku very challenging. I am becoming addicted to them. hehehehehe silentsky and Erin Good luck and look forward to reading yours. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I hope you keep writing them, I like this one. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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