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Dark Poetry #2

at a loss for words

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2000-10-04 02:57 AM

i could speak all night
but the feelings wouldn't come out right
i could cry all night
but the tears couldn't take tonite
visually stunning teraforms
couldn't hold a candle
i could wonder all damn day
i could even run away
you could say at least one thing
but life could be so sweet
life itself could give a clue
but life itself couldn't be new
can we help eachother
should we want another
can't we all just go along
couldn't we state we were wrong
can life inhibit
what once could ve
only life would believe
as a hair jumped
a hare ran
what once could be
is what life believed
i can't imagine life without stands
but what has become of man
a loss for words
never hurt so much

J.L. Koehler

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

1 posted 2000-10-04 02:31 PM

i know the feeling. i like your poem a lot. especially the last few lines.
shira

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-10-04 11:59 PM

I enjoyed the rhythmic pattern that you have developed in this piece. Great work

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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