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0 posted 2000-10-02 11:16 PM


Thighs of mine now choose to decline,
Lips of fire, I decide to hire,
Souls of the dead no longer I dread,
Water filled with sins meeting its kin,
Through the eyes of earth I saw the devils birth.
Truth no longer killing the old brute ,
Keeping the pace with the devils face,
I decide to end by the candle’s hand.


(help me with the title if you like)


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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shadydaze
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1 posted 2000-10-03 01:38 AM


-XeonoX-  

[This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-03-2000).]

shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
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2 posted 2000-10-03 01:38 AM


   i know who you are  
   I know it all  
   We know it all  
   you know me too...  
  
                  

                                            


[This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-03-2000).]

Lady Lost
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3 posted 2000-10-04 07:21 PM


This has left me speachless...

wonderfully written

...beth  

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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