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Screaming Mind.. Aching Heart
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Screaming Mind.. Aching Heart |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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My mind screams with memories. And my hearts aches with emptiness Hearing your voice whisper… Feeling your hands light touch… Only to realize that you left me, You left me here with nothing Nothing but this wound cut into my soul Did you love me at all? Could you love me and leave me stranded My mind cringes and I want to hide From the vision of you face That smiling face that turned so cold Once the smile that melted my heart Now mocks me with a condescending smirk How could I have been so foolish? How could I have been so blind? Here I sit in the lonely dark taunting night With nothing but my tears and My screaming mind and aching heart < !signature--> ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
When I read work like this I truly know I am home! This one really hits hard. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
reading your pain, and feel with you. *warm hug*.... Charisma |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked the circular nature... and the rest , too! this was very nice Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul -the eels |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
EagleOne - I'm glad you liked it.. I think we have all been there at one time or another. Thank you for stopping in. Charisma - Thank you so much for the hug.. but I am happy, thankful, and grateful to say that I am no longer at this place. I saw someone from my past the other day and it brought back some of the feelings from the past.. so this poem was basically based on memories. I am now in a very happy and warm place  Jannel - Thank you I'm very glad you enjoyed it. < !signature--> ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its his loss and someone elses gain one day..nicely written.. .. |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
It's as if you have reached into my very soul and took the emotion right out of it... I applaud this poem with a standing ovation. You and I are on the same mindwave or something... I loved this, and is as of now added to my favorites. Good work! "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
It's really awesome when you can write out pain...remembered or currently experienced isn't it? Sometimes I am SO grateful for words... Nice write. K |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Victoria - Thank you for stopping in.  SorrowsMystress - I don't know what to say!!! Thank you thank you thank you for your so kind words. I'm happy you liked it  Severn - I cannot tell you how many times I have had those same thoughts. Writing has saved me many many times in the past and I'm sure it will in the future. Thank you for taking time to stop in ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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