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Burning Desire
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Burning Desire |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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The warmth you made with just a spark burns like a fire within my heart destroying all within its path I can't break away. The love you sent through winter's chill burns me up, affects me still consuming all for good or ill with you I'll always stay. Obsession scalds within my mind hanging on to words unkind building again, me to remind why I can't drift this day. Your searing love has left its scar even though, we've gone too far and all that's left is ash and char remain with me I pray. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Aaaawwwwww... I loved it, particularly the ending, so sweet and sencere. Great job, take care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
made me shiver! Kathleen |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
passions flame does burn so hot i am envious of this fire you've got so hard to find, so very rare if only possible that you could share i'd rekindle the embers that lost their glow let the torch re-ignite, let radiant light show thanx... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LM - Thanks. Irish Rose - Thanks, did the poem make you shiver with cold or fear. shadydaze - thanks for the poem. the fire's gone the embers out and though I madly scream and shout I wonder why I still on stay but cannot seem to break away. his love was strong and pulled me in now I must pay for all my sin so I stand here wavering I can't go and I can't win. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing Kethry....James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you so much James. You are kind. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Great writing Kethry, kinda gives me that "been there" feeling. Loved the last verse! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Eagleone. did you "do that" while you had been there  Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wounds heal..Scars for ever remain. Nice writing. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Kitkat, you are so right. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely stuff Kethry.. take care eh? Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written..enjoyed.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Once again, Kethry, I know the feeling. Hope all is well. Awesome poem. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, fear for you if something like this truly happened, I hope not. Sometimes with verse it's difficult to know. Best to you always Kathleen |
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