Dark Poetry #2 |
The Beast---Repost frm OP#9 |
jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
I’ve fallen prey to the beast once again. I fear this time I may die. I tried to stay away from its unholy sin And far from its deceptive lie. But it reared up, showed its fangs And took aim straight for my heart. Its power can drive a madman sane Then rip that sane man apart. Further and further it sunk its teeth in, Seems it will never let me go. I think this pain will never end, No mercy will it show. It threw me into its dark pit of light. Down, down, down I fall Though I see I have no sight It will be the end of us all. I cried out to He who has all answers, ‘What ever shall I do?’ I would trade it for a thousand cancers. Of this beast I wish I never knew. Then a voice said, “Child, your tormentor is not a beast, You are looking at it all too wrong. It is something of which you should feast For it is much more beautiful than a song. You say this time you may die. Don’t worry this 'beast' won’t kill. It’s truly the Law we hold most high It is Love, Love under Will.” < !signature--> Love is the law, love under will. [This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I loved the ending Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
jlocke, sounds like the beast within, which rages to be free but cannot as long as we hold the key. Good write. Kethry |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Xeonox--Kethry--Thank You Both Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law. Love is the law, love under will. |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
great writing (i know the Beast of which you speak) He who has all the answers the Law Love, Love under Will - shadydaze- |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Shadydaze HEH HEH HEH |
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