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Dark Poetry #2

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Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-09-30 07:16 PM

What do you see,
In the painting black,
What do shadows,
Make of the dark,

When can you see,
The pale immersion,
Dancing passed black,
offering little light,

What can you see,
Deep in my soul,
Tell me,
For all I see is black,

What can you see,
When light seeps in,
Suddenly bright,
Back in your heart,

What can you see,
In the painting black,
What do the shadows,
Make of the dark.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

**Tammy**
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 14

1 posted 2000-09-30 10:39 PM

I really like the poem. keep them coming.

**Tammy**

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2000-10-01 06:30 PM

Thanks

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-10-02 07:09 AM

Maria,
great poem, loved the images.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

4 posted 2000-10-02 07:42 AM

i really like this a whole lot.
i feel the same way a lot of the time. emptiness.
thank you
shira

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

5 posted 2000-10-02 03:14 PM

it seems no matter what colors you see at the time, black always looms close by

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2000-10-02 03:29 PM

Kethry - Thanks a lot

Silentsky - Sorry to hear that its not a nice feeling at all. hope things get better.

Shadydaze - doesn't it just

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

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