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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
Okay first of all... sorry about the language in this poem. I'm going to edit most of or at least try to... my best friend is clinically depressed... she wrote this and gave it to me one night crying her eyes out. She is my best friend... no one could understand me like she does... and I'm the only one she'll actually open up to... it's hard for me to see her like this... please read this and tell me what yall think I should say to her to make her happy again... I can't seem to find the right words myself. I never knew we could live in a world so cold where everything seems so bold I want to unfold let myself out show them what it's all about wake up idiots there is no "lord" and if there is I wanna break him like a cord. Everyone believes but ****** LISTEN damn PLEASE he's not alive you can't deny you can't see him so how do you know it's real?? If he's really there, here's only here to kill you're not gonna live so shut up and pop this pill **** church quit listening to people purch it's time to quit playing games and start breakin frames start tryin to live this short life right start putting up a fight open up your eyes and see the dreadful lights I hate my life I wanna be stabbed with a knife my mom's a ***** someone put a curse on her maybe a witch my dad is dead but I'm glad he's peacefully sleeping in a bed I've been in love but someone ****** it up someone from "above" but I'm still remaining tough it's hard to be strong when everything I do is wrong someday~ I might live among among the best so **** the rest I want a responsible person I can turn to in the future even when my world is crashing and I feel like slashing someone who cares I think that is rare no one will ever really care so **** it all disobey the law we're all gonna fall we're just gonna die there is no reason for anyone to lie your whole purpose of living is dying there's no reason to stay nothing will ever be okay. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is scary, some1 is definatly living a tortured life, to have this much anger. I thought I was bad. You must be a good friend though, for her to trust you with this. Let her know you are there for her & you care about her & life's too short to waste on hate. I hope this gets better for both of you LOVE ELMO <3 SMILE  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow some hate filled emotions. I sometimes get to a stage in my life where I dont feel as if I belong here but never this bad. I always have someone to talk about it with like my boyfriend. I dont know what to say except be there for your friend. I mean you already show that you are. Dont give up on her. It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi, That was very deep! I think the other two replies said it all. If she doesn't have anyone else to give her some of the joy's of life, you are her friend and you already gave enough proof to that. You just need to let her know how much you care about her! Life's too short To throw away The souls we meet From day to day Just take a hold On the ones who care And all their sorrows You must share |
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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
Thanks yall She's had a lot of things to happen to her... but I think she's getting better... I'm helping her out as much as I can... she won't realy let anyone get close to her and that just makes it harder to be there for her... I mean she's like my sister and I would do anything at all to help her out in any way but sometimes I just can't and it feels like I'm not doing as much as I can or I'm not good enough to bring her out of her hole. When she gave me this poem she had had a fight with her mom and she was crying and I was crying and BLAH I just broke down... it's really bringing me down to her to see her like this... I have family problems too with my "dad"... if I should even call him that and it's hard enough for me to see her having to go through this after me. I'm running out of things to say to her... "It'll be okay" just doesn't seem to work anymore. Tell me what ya'll think... maybe you have the answer... I sure as hell don't. *^~Do YoU WoRrY ThAt YoU'rE NoT LiKeD, HoW LoNg TiLL YoU BrEaK, YoU'Re HaPpY CaUsE YoU SmiLe BuT HoW MuCh CaN YoU FaKe?*~^ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
AnGeL, there are no words that I can say to make the hurting go away but if you need an ear to bend just call on me, email your friend. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
troubled girl, rest your hate time is short, love is great if only things were what you see how simple then this life would be if eveything were as it seems, what would become of hopes and dreams? indeed this world is a hectic place but look into the depths of space. see the stars, they twinkle bright and add beauty to the darkest night. we can't reach them, but still they're there with wondrous glamour for all to share. the same is the things we cannot see. that's just the way they need to be. if you havent noticed this of man, he destroys all things within his hand. the most precious things,we cannot hold, they can't be bought, they can't be sold. like the stars we all can see, thats just the way they need to be. [This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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