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Lady Lost
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0 posted 2000-09-30 04:19 PM


Not afraid of the consequences
Its all that you know
You don’t have to be afraid
It’s the only place you have to go

Hold onto to it dearly
Grip it with all that you are
Don’t let it get away
Or you will be left alone with your scars

It leaves you shaking at night
Your screams become too loud to hear
So you beg for some more
You are numb when it’s near

You try to escape it
You think you can run
Until you finally realize
It is all you’ve become



"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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boardman
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since 2000-05-09
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1 posted 2000-09-30 05:27 PM


Hi Lady Lost,

Wow, very intense!
I'm not sure I understand it, but I can equate this one with Dreams. It fits nicely there for me. I like it.  




"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
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2 posted 2000-09-30 07:19 PM


Boardman; thanks for your reponse...its about vices, things that we are all guilty of indulging in to escape our problems..whether it be work, drugs, over eating...its about how dependant some people become.  Hope that helps!....beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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