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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well kids i'm back...been 10 days since i posted...been busy...he's been gond for so long...i wrote this on the anniversary of our breakup... this kinda fits with the poem "without you i'm not ok and without you i've lost my way my heart's stuck in second place, ooOOoh, without you" Dixie Chicks... ~As if You knew~ Pain shoots through my heart knowing you dont love me heartache running through my veins please say you wont leave me broken for all to see like a doll they play with me i want to hate you so i wont hate me it never ends this horrid pain its here again along with strain i dont want to love you anymore but the pain wont stop i dont want to love you but love cant stop i dont want to cut myself for you i wish you only know all the times i didn't hide i had you by my side you never brought me shame only what i want and now i am to blame it's all my fault you trusted me and i broke that alone am i just like that in my dreams i still feel you hanting me as if you knew Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikolette~~~This is a really good way to get out your pain. I like the way that you wrote this. I hope that one day soon your pain heals. And until that day I wish you the best! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Good poem Nik....I haven't posted in a while either... Dark Star |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanks for the replies you two...i'm glad you liked it...i miss him agian and its bad fro me...  Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
so nobody like this one or what?...i'm thinking of doing this one at a reading...think i should? i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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melroseg Junior Member
since 2000-09-29
Posts 16 |
I love this poem. It's really brave to bare your heart like this. I know what you feel, though. It's hard because you don't know what to do with yourself once he's gone and everything is a reminder of the good and the bad you shared, you lay in bed at night haunted by the memory of his scent and his touch and his taste and sound, then you cry yourself to sleep and wake up with a fake plaster smile to fool everyone, but inside your falling apart. I hope I'm not being too presumptuous or intruding, it's just that I know that exact feeling. It'll take a while, but you'll feel better in the end. If you want someone to talk to e-mail me. Melissa |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think its a great poem, I hope your pain eases soon! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well this is a good poem. sorry i've been gone so long. but as to what you asked me on the phone i don't know if i can cause friday the 13 i work till 7:30p.m and saturday i have dep's but maybe i can get off work if Liz would work it but she goe's to your school and i don't know if she's going to homecoming or not. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Nikolette, I like this one a lot. I have to admit, I have been there many times myself. It will pass. There is way too much pain in this world. If it only didn't have to be. Wouldn't that be nice? Have a Happy Day! Vince "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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