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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-29 10:52 PM


Hey guys this might be my last post for a while. I'm moving into my 1st own apartment & don't know how much I'll be able to come back here (home) & write, but don't worry I'll be back. Just remember you're never lost, you're just temporarily disorientated   lol here:

I'M HERE

How many sorrows have I cried on your shoulder?
How many times have I found peace in your embrace?
How many times have you held me when the wind blew colder?
How many tears have you wiped fronm my face?

The 1st time I met you,
I was sad & all alone.
Noone left to turn to,
I was all on my own.

You opened your arms,
& took away my fears.
Kept away life's harms.
Kept me sane & took away the tears.

Now I'm much stronger,
then I'll ever be.
I thank God everyday,
for pointing you to me.

So if you ever need me,
anytime, anywhere,
wherever you may be.
I promise I'll be there.

And you can cry your sorrows on my shoulder,
& find peace in my embrace.
I'll hold you when the wind blows colder,
& I'll wipe every tear from your face!

~This was originally for Keith, but it holds true for Passions too   Luv ya guys LOVE ELMO   <3 ~

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1 posted 2000-09-30 03:27 AM


Great poem. I loved this lines.

I thank God everyday,
for pointing you to me.




Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-30 12:22 PM


Thanx   LOVE ELMO I'm leaving today  
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-30 01:46 PM


Elmo~~~You always have the sweetest poems. I liked this one along with all your other work. You are talented. I hope you still do post even after you move. Thanks for sharing this!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

boardman
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since 2000-05-09
Posts 44

4 posted 2000-09-30 06:11 PM


Hi Elmo,

Very nicely said.

I often feel I was put here to lend that shoulder. My only problem is I don't like to let them go! Oops!

Good luck with the move. I know it can be a lot of work. We will wait for you to return!

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2000-09-30 10:32 PM


Awe thanx guys i'll come back to visit don't worry   I'm, almost all moved in yay LOVE ELMO <3
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