Dark Poetry #2 |
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Clinging To Youth |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY ![]() |
CLINGING TO YOUTH Clinging to youth, as the last strings fall away. Stuck somewhere in the middle, though wanting to hang back & stay. Like a VCR forwarding fast, pause, slow motion, rewind, it's not quite easy to make it last. Why can't we go back, to when life was simple. When a day felt like a week, when we'd get up real early, & leap to our feet. When we had time to stop & smile, to smell a flower, or watch some ants march past. We're now too busy rushing, getting into a crash, where life may be taken, in an instant, a flash. So take your time now, savor scenery as you drive by. Don't forget to laugh, & never be afraid to cry. Don't lose the child at heart, live as free as you please. Go crazy, get silly, hug all the trees! ![]() ~Life's too short to rush, enjoy & be happy!~ LOVE ELMO <3 [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
ok that sux somehow the format got screwed up on this one. oh well u get the idea lol ![]() |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Ok i fixed it, much better ![]() |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
I love this...I know exactly what you mean....you write so beautiful...Greg |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe thanx Greg, this one just popped into my head while i was drivin home the other day ![]() |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
You know, this poem reminds me of a radio show I once listened to. In one scene, a man was watching a bunch of children, all walking in different directions, pursuing different dreams. BUt then, after a while, they all started to walk in the same direction, and they lost the fire and dreams of their youth. This is a great poem! I liked it. Yes, it is a good idea to stop and smile at times. I think it was Wordsworth who said, "The World is too Much With Us". |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe yea that's a great way to put it. It's weird how many different ways a poem can be translated thanx ![]() |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
ahhhhh yes, great Words! *S* Zyell |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
OK, How many more times are you going to read my mind? I love this one! I am still trying to figure out what I am going to be when I grow up. I feel that inside I am still very young. I won't say how old, that would give away the age you know? Ha Ha! Vince "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
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