Dark Poetry #2 |
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A Feeble Thankyou for Sven |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland ![]() |
If only words could express how I feel, If only, If only, If only I could really touch him, The same as he's touched me, If only, If only... I've never met him, Yet he knows me so well, From thousands of miles away, He needn't ask, he can just tell. He knows my innermost feelings, The hurt, the confusion, the pride, He knows when I'm on a downer, And briefly in his rhymes I can hide. If only I could do for him, What he's done for me, If only I could be his rock, From far across the sea. If only, If only.. He's had his troubles too, Misunderstandings and prejudices, I only hope I have helped him, Half as much as he's helped me. Sven I cannot get it out, Cannot find the words to explain, How having a friend such as you, Has been a diversion from life's pain. If only you could see what I see, Feel what I feel, Then there'd be an inkling of true understanding, Then there'd be a balanced keel. Thankyou my friend for everything, For holding my hand across the spance of space and time, For understanding, respecting and loving me, A kindred spirit with loving words in rhyme. *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isis~~~Thats what I love most about this place. I have made friends with a few people that I honestly trust very much. And its good that you are showing your appreciation to Sven by writing this beautiful poem. I hope he likes it cause I sure did!!! ![]() |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Erin, this poet was stumped couldn't really get it out how I wanted, but the message is there all the same. Thanks Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and what a wonderful message it is. . . ![]() Thank you so much my kindred. . . this has touched me very deeply. . . I am so glad that we have become friends. . . I don't know what I would do without your wonderful heart and understanding. . . it means a lot to me. . . I'm glad that I can do the same for you. . . that our friendship and love can stretch over these words and wires is amazing. . . Thank you again. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Isis, amazing write for an amazing friendship. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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