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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-09-26 02:57 AM


Pawns,
Players,
In a deadly game of cat and mouse,
Pathetic fools that count their lives,
By how much they earn,
Or how many people they know,
Incompetent morons who don't understand,
What it's like to live,
They pray for more time,
They pray for better times,
But they don't know who they're praying to,
And they don't know what they'd give,
They don't understand the concept,
The rules,
There is only a certain amount of time,
You can cut it short,
But you can't lengthen it,
Those are the rules,
Obey them or get the hell out of the game,
It's not his fault,
Or hers,
Only yours,
You screwed up,
You lost,
Time to pay the price my sweet,
Can you afford it?

© Copyright 2000 Michelle - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-09-26 03:57 PM


I see bitterness between the lines here.
Well written.

Joy

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-26 04:08 PM


Wow, very interesting thoughts, enjoyed reading it. Some people really do not know how to live the years they're given...

Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
3 posted 2000-09-27 12:03 PM


Heya baby,

Welcome to the online mausoleum!  

Hmmm, sometimes you’re good, but when you’re bad you’re even better…hehe
Just remember a pawn can put a king in check…hehe

Laters

In-wishing-I-devised-some-macro-for-typing-this-signature-lines-out-so-I-save-time…DOH!

THERE IS NO SPOON!  



Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Singing, "If i die before i wake..."


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