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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana 
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I was down and out, You were there I thought I was alone But know I know I have a friend till the end. I moved away lost touch. came back and you were there as if I never left. "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
good job.....glad your back...nice poem |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Isn't it grand when you think you are alone and find that those that are true friends always remain...though time, distance, and termoil! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
That is one of the best feelings in the world, knowing that you have a friend there for you no matter what. Nice job!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great feeling, isn't it? Very nice short poem! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Its nice to see a positive poem here once in a while. This one made me feel good. Thanks. |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Thanks Greg, Erin, LM, and iLph... I did this one after a really bad sean at work. I had called up a old friend who made me relize no matter how hard things may seem there's always a light at the end. Thanks again! Michell "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Yeah Ali its the best feeling I have ever felt! Michell "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Good Michell..glad things are looking up finally...take care  Greg |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There's nothing like knowing someone will be there is there? I enjoyed this. Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hon...this is great work...keep writing |
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