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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-09-23 07:47 AM


He who was
the vision the dark
he who was
a man without heart
he who felt
the earth move
he who heard
the planets groan
he who saw
what goes on around
he who moves
under above the ground
he who lost
his love so fair
he who remembers
every golden hair
he who cries
his lonely nights away
remember him not
he dies today


Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
'Tis

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-23 09:37 AM


I really like this piece
I dont know how to reply only to say
it really made me think
Kinda sad but true
great Job
Bluebrdy

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2000-09-23 10:05 AM


Fabulous writing Walter, glad to se you back!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

3 posted 2000-09-23 10:27 AM


.....Awesrtricken.....Remarkable....
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-09-23 12:34 PM


Fantastic composition of a lost love...I have one now and I don't want to lose her...James
LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-09-23 04:59 PM


Great piece, really enjoyed reading it.
Take Care!


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-09-26 08:14 PM


This is full of emotion and meaning, and by the way, I love your quote.  < !signature-->

Kathleen




[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 09-26-2000).]

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