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firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2000-09-24 03:21 PM


Well if you know me
My mind wanders when I'm alone
And left to think
And ponder on my own.

If you know me
You realize it's hard to trust
For I am rehearsed
In the powers of lust.

If you know me
I worry about you every day
And want us together
Forever in every way.

If you know me
I'm wondering where you are
If you are with who
You told me you are.

If you know me
I won't be able to sleep tonight
Til I hear your voice
To wish me goodnight.

If you know me
I have a lot of doubts
Except my love in you
I cannot live without...

If you know me...

Jeremy T. Sellers
6/24/99
12:23 AM

     It's been a while.  Working on some new stuff, but thought I'd throw in a short selection while I am.  It's been a dry fall emotionally.  Am lacking in inspiration.
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"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe


[This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 09-24-2000).]

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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-24 04:25 PM


It's a great piece! I really really enjoyed it!
"If you know me
I have a lot of doubts
Except my love in you
I cannot live without..."

Take Care!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-24 09:06 PM


this really descibes me too
great Job
I loved this piece
Blue

DeathTrippy
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA
3 posted 2000-09-25 12:22 PM


Excellent work.  lustful obsessions...  you describe them best.
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-09-25 12:28 PM


"If you know me..."
so very well said...
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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