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This morning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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This morning when I woke up to face the same old, same old… I realized the spark had gone and I was dead and cold My heart had turned to ashes at the death of your great love And all that's left are memories, a dearth of push and shove I thought I saw your face and then, you disappeared once again I looked to see, reflections of a lonely me, hiding in the rain Looking through the windows absorbing all my light Finding only bitterness, to help me with my plight Waiting for the moment to turn away, but drawn To the featureless plateau of the rising dawn. A craven coward nothing left, nothing more to say Except to make a welcome to my dreary same old day. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Kethry... thoughts expressed wonderfully... look after yourself  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
if everything is always the same, than at least you know what to expect. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Kethry I so understand and relate to your poem wonderful job I hope things get better Bluebrdy |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree, it's all too easy to get caught up in the day to day drearyness of ones life! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kethry, this is so sad, and I relate so well. Very on target with this. Hope you feel better soon. Sandra |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Kethry i think you have successfully described every dull, rainy-day monday, where work and personal problems collide, with you squashed in the middle. Excellently written Josh. |
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