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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I'm not really as depressed as all this..  The curtain of silence oppresses me, harshly reminds me you are gone. Still, the timber of your voice is emblazoned in my mind. I see your face in my reverie. Our nights of rare communion so cruelly missed. I am a hollow shell of myself. I ache to go back. I hold close the memories to the edge of obsession. You belong with me-why aren't you here? Listen.. with a little effort, I can still hear your impassioned whispers in the night. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God how close this is to home for me. When you get use to someone being there, and then turn of events make them go away, you hear them in the house all the time. After my divorce, I could still hear my little girl calling me at night, to scare away the ghost. god. ok I'm done. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good...sometimes poets can reach back to that dusty wretched corner of the soul to bring out something really dark..even though we don't feel it. This is the sign of a good poet.  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i sometimes write happy and i'm not. so i can understand where this came from. Just joking i'm sometimes happy. anyway great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The curtains of silence...Oh how we can hear the voices, or footsteps of someone gone. This was just superb!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Cat... I am such a fan of yours... I absulutly love the way you craft words into art. Simply Beutiful...as always LarBear |
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Tasha New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 6 |
Fantastic poem!! It hit real close to home.I really liked the line -I am a hollow shell of myself. that feeling is sometiems so near! great job! Tasha |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra...another one of yours I missed. I'm so glad people love you enough to go back and bring these forward. This is so wonderful...even if it is sad. I love it...and you for sharing it. Hardrock |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Cat, As always stunning and moving Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
exactly how I feel of a lost love(or should I say a love that was never there?) anyway, this is wonderful...brings alot of memories for me. wonderful job here. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i already cried more than once today...all i can say is it is truly beautiful... Nikolette Sadness |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Cat, you are so good at this. I remember that feeling all too well, and it's no fun! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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