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I Feel Hateful Tonight
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I Feel Hateful Tonight |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Hateful Sometimes the hate comes pouring out, I smell it from within. No difference does it make, if it is he, that's drinking gin. Or if it's me, I'm drunk on hate, especially right now. I curse the day he found that comfort, instead of me, somehow. I'm venting in the passion's dark, am sitting in it, too. That dismal, dank and lonely place, instead of being with you. Someday he'll wish he hadn't, too late, by then will be. I'll learn to fly and soar the skies I'll smile, 'cause I'll be free. MM 2k *sorry it's almost 2 and I am sulking....as he just walked in... [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
MM, don't be sorry, this is great. Full of emotion. I'm sorry about your situation, though (presuming it is real). Are you OK? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
be i unsure. know i not the total situation. just be i, confused..a lover???or a parental male??? Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
yes thank you..just discouraged and disappointed that I have to sit up this late waiting to make sure he arrives home alive...although sometimes wishing.... *no not really...I am too nice to want that to happen ~~soft smile almost Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
no sadness...a husband...if it was any other I would be rid of him by now.... ~~softly Maureen |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
tru love cant stop...the pain is always there...ive learned that and i have scars to proove it Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
I wrote this a while ago, and frankly I don't think it's that great of a poem but I ask that you look only at the meaning intended behind it. Hugs for you. heh. It was actually the first post ever on this forum for me. Les femmes. God's masterpiece, His gift to man. So fragile to the eye. So warm to the toutch. They are made of a fabric apart from all others. Flowing, each detail flowing into the next. Strong, adament in the belief that they are worthy. Alive. Their emotion beams from them. Their love all consuming. What else could overcome the pain of spending one's life, working, shaping, loving, laughing, crying, teaching, and worrying only to walk away? What makes a woman so......divine? 'Tis not thier flesh, even though it is the tangible product of the ether's design. Their holiness is because of their minds. Their wit unparalled folded with allure. Some charm that one can not resist. An aroma of mystique. Aloofness only sparks furthur interest. These things make a woman. Their love is a poison. Not to kill the mind or soul. A poison to kill all desire for anything but them. Oh to taste that sweet poison only to die again and again at thier whim. To be reborne by their love. I say this to women, "Stand proud and let no one make you think you are any less then my desperatly inadequate account of you. Transcend all doubt and shine as the angels that you are." |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beowulf_26...brought tears to my eyes...thank you for posting a most beautiful poem *I like your 26 by the way...it's my day of birth... the dawning brings gray clouds again the spiritless still sleeps I come to join the living and in words of soft, I keep this head held higher as the day begins to stretch it's arms And dream my thoughts and wantings of eyes that hold my charms... don't know where this just came from..but maybe it's a poem trying to come out... ~~softly smiling...at the inspiration you created in me this morn..thank you doubly Maureen |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Kethry walks over and gives MMoonchild a big hug. *hugs*. Been there done that don't let it get to you. Thanks for the poem which was not beautiful but deep and moving anyway. Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Thanks for the poem which was not beautiful but deep and moving anyway. Kethry... Lovin' the hug and the smile you brought to my face when you said "Thanks for the poem which was not beautiful but ...." well I certainly have to agree with you on this one...I am chucklin' a bit too ~~soft smiles and {{hugs}} back Maureen |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I was in that situation once many yrs ago...I had to leave as the stress was by far too much for me. I only wish you comfort during this time, you have my ((hugs)) too!! Very sad, but you did an excellent job with expressing yourself!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Deb...today seems a bit brighter at least when on here.. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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