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gjam
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since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-21 12:20 PM



  The road is winding
on the path of fate
   When time for choice
which road to take?

  The heart says right
the head says left
  This kind of confusion
is not whats best.

  Beware the path
thought too long too hard
  fate is always waiting
just to pull your card.

  The pattern is life
whether love or lust
  no matter what you do
only you can trust.

  Decisions will be made
wrong turns we will take
  just a day in the life
of the beast called fate.

  Stand tough in the road
some didn't make it there
  Let your strength prevail
and you will not fail


[This message has been edited by gjam (edited 09-21-2000).]

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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-21 03:26 AM


Great!!!
I love this issue, contemplating about fate and destiny... good one!
Take Care!


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


gjam
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since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-09-21 11:51 PM


Thanks I'm glad you liked it....I wasn't too sure about this one..I wrote it in about 5 minutes while i was messing around on the net.  But I too like the issue of fate and destiny... Greg  

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-09-22 10:17 PM


I loved this ! 5 minutes huh? well it's great !!
DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
4 posted 2000-09-22 11:00 PM


thinking of fate is interesting, but  I think shes got her hands full sometimes and its important that we give her a little help sometimes.  

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

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