Guarded Castle (a repost redone)

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Dark Poetry #2

Guarded Castle (a repost redone)

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-09-20 01:17 PM

I live by  a guarded castle
One with towering walls
The waters surround it
Dark and deep

I can not get beyond your stronghold
No  life I find  within this hardened mass
What has fixed this stone so rigid?

Desperately

I search for some warmth
A  light that will melt it's frozen gaze


Nothing stirs
Nothing will breathe


Why have you  locked this door and thrown away the key?
What will melt this icy thorn lodged so deeply?
This frigidness chills me to the bone

Lying in a pool of death
Naked now amongst the light of day.

I find no refuge here
In your guarded castle

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 09-20-2000).]

2shallow
New Member

since 2000-09-20

Posts 3

1 posted 2000-09-20 08:26 PM

I have often written sad poetry as a way of unloading my emotions. I hope that writing helps you in the same way. Sometimes when I write I feel as though nothing else matters but the words on the page. Write for life!

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

2 posted 2000-09-20 08:43 PM

Wonderfully done. This poem is filled with so much emotion.
"Lying in a pool of death
Naked from the light of day."
So sad, but so beautiful. Keep it up

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-09-20 10:12 PM

Very intense and sad. I know the feeling well. Take care.
catalinamoon

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