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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-09-20 12:39 PM


Wind

He said:
Your dragonfly eyes
Are mine, for they are you
They are the stream
They are the ocean
The firmament, it lies within
The microcosm of your eyes

He said:
Your butterfly smile
Is mine, for it is you
It is the light
It is the dew
Infinity, it lies inside
The microcosm of your smile

He said these words
But when she turned
To find her King
No one was there
Except the wind  

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Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo




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silentsky
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-09-20 01:07 PM


i love this. so beautiful.
means so much to me.
shira

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-20 10:02 PM


Wow Uta!

"He said these words
But when she turned
To find her King
No one was there
Except the wind"

I saw this image in my mind... portrayed very well!  

Take care, hey!    Will write soon!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-09-20 10:17 PM


Wow, I was just about to say how well this man can talk, and then, poof, he was gone! I hate that!  Awesome poem.
catalinamoon

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