Dark Poetry #2 |
Heart of the Night |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The heart of the night beats passions of ecstasy flowing through moonlight veins are crimson thoughts of fantasy Shadows wander hauntingly bare entangled within tassels of golden moonlight hair Wolf winds swirls in the darkness quencing its thirsts for lust savoring each precious moment in the bed of the earths crust Eyes peek in the darkness behind ebony veil of the night watching the trembling body the golden body of moonlight [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Is this supposed to romantic? 'cause it is and it is REALLY awesome. --Little Girl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I would say its more on the sensuous side then romantic.. im glad you enjoyed.. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Victoria... this is superb! Yes, very sensual indeed... Love the line: "behind ebony veil of the night" Very nice read! Thanks! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Tara.. I almost missed you haa |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, very sensual and beautiful. catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you catalinamoon..for peeking in.. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Very nice....Greg |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Greg..appreciate your comments |
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