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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-09-19 04:50 PM



The heart of the night
beats passions of ecstasy
flowing through moonlight veins
are crimson thoughts of fantasy

Shadows wander hauntingly bare
entangled within tassels
of golden moonlight hair

Wolf winds swirls in the darkness
quencing its thirsts for lust
savoring each precious moment
in the bed of the earths crust

Eyes peek in the darkness
behind ebony veil of the night
watching the trembling body
the golden body of moonlight


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-19-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-09-19 05:50 PM


Is this supposed to romantic? 'cause it is and it is REALLY awesome.
--Little Girl

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2 posted 2000-09-19 10:06 PM


I would say its more on the sensuous side then romantic.. im glad you enjoyed..
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3 posted 2000-09-20 06:00 AM


Victoria... this is superb! Yes, very sensual indeed...

Love the line:
"behind ebony veil of the night"

Very nice read! Thanks!  

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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4 posted 2000-09-20 10:05 PM


Thank you Tara.. I almost missed you haa  
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5 posted 2000-09-20 10:14 PM


Yes, very sensual and beautiful.
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6 posted 2000-09-21 12:18 PM


Thank you catalinamoon..for peeking in..
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7 posted 2000-09-21 12:21 PM


Very nice....Greg
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8 posted 2000-09-22 12:50 PM


Thank you Greg..appreciate your comments  
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