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Concrete Tears.... |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
I walk the concrete streets with tears Memories ripped inside out erased and gone Street rhythms tatooing in my soul My eyelids shutter as streetscenes imprint upon my mind. I walk the streets alone again except for the tears as my companions For sharing the tableaux with you is my desire To walk the concrete streets in joy, arms entwined Partaking of the city beat our souls synchronized to its pace I walk the concrete streets anew alone no more For I am renewed imbued with your spirit Replacing the pain of past purgatories with a dance of destiny. I walked the concrete streets with tears and proven false memories juggled images of past perogatives awry but now with you We can slow dance to the concrete street harmony made by us. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Great choice of words with this one! "Replacing the pain of past purgatories with a dance of destiny." Enjoyed the read!  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi eegood, This is excellent its amazing what we remember from the past like the concrete or rhythums of the dance of love that once was, very nicely done, very much enjoyed. Welcome to passions I look forward to more of your work. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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