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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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final inspection of the human race trilogy of souls left without a trace man face to face with man the eyes hollow different somehow than the ones we knew when we were young changed somehow have they gained their control? when we weren't looking? eyes shut for just a moment snuck in through the back door who left it open? were they invited? who let them in? their ship bound for earth to find out just how much a human soul is worth how long have they been here? how long have I been gone? how many yesterdays have I missed? caged inside my brain they want to know what drives a Man insane i won't let them in i won't let them win closing the gate now mind goes black as mankind prepares for the attack.... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Many times I have felt like shutting the whole damn world out but if I do then where would you be?LOL Wonderful write my friend and very powerful. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Powerful poem Julie!  Particularly the ending! Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Hello...i liked this one...something about it...good job....Greg |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
A good look at the human race..I like it, it makes ya think of how our world is today Birdee |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good poem Julie, there's something about it that's like looking in a mirror. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
very cool poem the concep is sometimes thought yet never said we came to this planet somehow and took it over we destroy it on a daily basis we forget how precious our lives are we forget how precious the planet is like I said, very cool poem. |
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