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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-09-15 05:31 PM




Leaves are falling,
from the trees.
Seasons change,
and so have we.

We are living,
something else.
Why do we do this,
to ourself?

It is not the way,
we wanted it done.
Does it matter,
what we've become?

Things do change,
and sometimes die.
Like what we have,
between you and I.

My hope is this,
that in the end,
I find the will,
to love again.


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             Click





[This message has been edited by Click (edited 09-15-2000).]

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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-15 06:07 PM


Oh... Click, it's wonderful, a reall beauty.
I hope you'll find the will... eventually the will will find you, you won't even need to try that hard...  
All the best!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-15 06:25 PM


Click~~~I wish you the best of luck with finding love. This was good. Sounds like you poured out your whole heart for this one. Keep it up!!!
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
3 posted 2000-11-06 08:24 PM


oh i really like this one click.  i hope the same for you, and for myself as well.  oh heck, for everyone here while i am at it.  love ya man.  keep up the great work.  you inspire me.  my humble thanks to you.  you always teach me with your words.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-06 11:59 PM


A wonderful post! I loved this to the T!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-11-07 04:55 PM


Like the feelings in this one...James
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-11-07 08:04 PM


Such heaviness here...

you have communicated it adroitly...and I can relate.

I am sure you will. Eventually.

There is that time thing to consider...

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
7 posted 2000-11-07 08:17 PM


Yes I also agree... this just beautiful! It all goes together quite nicely with a great pattern.

Well done
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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