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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

0 posted 2000-09-13 01:41 AM

WHISPERS

Ah, they whisper, "whisper - whisper",
Whisper, even still...
As I walk the long and lulling,
Needing, nodding hill.
Bleeding Sorrow by the morrow,
Bleeding, burning, still.
Silence shaking in the waking
Of all good - to ill.

Shape me - rape me, Darkness drape me
In your robes of plight -
By the droning of the moaning
Dead that walk this night -
By the shadows, long and lulling,
Pulling even still...
As I walk the sleepy, creepy,
Needing, nodding hill.

Pale hands to me thus imbue me
Wayward towards the sun.
Subtle, profound, (all without sound),
Lingering shadows run.
By the trying of love, dying,
Shall Beauty unseen...
Whisper to me of a newly
Veiled Hope I must glean.

Whisper to me, whisper through me,
Whisper even still -
Of a Sorrow bled tomorrow
On winds, quiet and still.
Perchance to fade, amidst the glade
Of passions held afore,
In one needing, nodding, bleeding
Glimpse of evermore

Michael Anderson

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

1 posted 2000-09-13 06:03 AM

Wow, this was like REALLy intense.... I loved it!!

luvz, Virgin Suïcide

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-13 04:04 PM

hey you...just prowling around and look what I found...effectively assonant...(learned a new woid, heh heh) I curtsey to the Prince of Darkness...

later-gator-gator!!!
(that was for JM...)

so now you know what humidity is, eh? hee hee...hope you are well and happy, m'friend.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-09-13 04:56 PM

It was really great!
I'm very impressed

Loved your rhyming style! Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-09-13 06:56 PM

Welcome back oh Dark Lord, glad to see you in here again!!

As usual a masterpiece of emotion

You may not see much of me over the next couple of weeks (School Hols here) but I'll be around and hope to catch up with you soon.
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

5 posted 2000-09-14 07:04 AM

LM is right, the rhyming style is great.. great piece, Michael.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-09-15 12:41 PM

there's something very soothing about the way you write, even if it is dark , enjoyed!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-09-16 02:50 AM

WOW

This is dark and brilliant all at once.

Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-04-28 01:16 PM

Still reading..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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