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summer
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 2000-09-12 04:17 PM


Why do I cry at thoughts that have yet to transpire.  My own silence frightens me now. Unconciously I drift to unspoken lands. Am I in love with you or do I hate your very core.  Tricked I was or did I trick myself. Living without you is no longer an option. Your cells have become my own and your seed has made a home.
Is this the meaning of
"Im crazy about you"  


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-12 04:33 PM


Very nice writing....James
LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-12 05:19 PM


You know, yesterday I was trying to write something with this meaning of being crazy about someone... I don't know, lately I just can't write anything good, can't write at all, so this was very nice to read coz you've put my feelings so well
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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