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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
its the way i climbed out of bed this morning its the way i gave myself that look in the mirror and then all through the day i could see me all arms and legs like i was as a child climbing into your lap a little smile full of nonexistent innocence asking to be stroked like the kitten i wish i still was |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"nonexistant innocence" we all often need to feely innocent again..like a child...i liked this...very nice. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... I liked this one too silentsky... if you are referring to same, sometimes it would be nice to slip back to childhood... it brings with it a feeling of security and peace, doesn't it? And of course, when everything is well, you can't but help purr in contentment  Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Cute...  I liked it! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
silentsky, I liked this. Oh the innocence of kittenhood. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I want to come back as a cat, with a loving Mommy just like me. Free to come and go as you please. Love available anytime, all you have to do is ask!! And that someone feeds you, combs you, cares for you... ah.. nothing finer. Liked this piece reminded me of the cat or being a child (where the weight of the world is something you've never known). Great work *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this was an incredible metaphor and very well written. i love it. mrow. jann elizabeth |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was EXTREMELY cute. Made me just wanna hug you. Keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Shira, i am enjoying your continuing theme of miniaturisation and split physicality. you spark pretty images. im sure your kittys enjoyed this one. Josh. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
i liked this ...i tottally now how you felt...i hope you dont mind you have inspired me to write something dealing with lions....im a leo and find i have alot in common with the lion.....great job... |
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