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I Don't Want to be Right
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I Don't Want to be Right |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Don't Want to be Right Unfaithful... a wife Unforgiven... by a husband unwilling to take her back into his life. Why??? he couldn't stand anymore pain. he wouldn't accept any more strife. In conclusion... Now he has buckets of pain soaking him like torrential rain. Serves him right... being sad and lonely in the middle of the night. Can't believe I'm wrong and I don't want to be right. Jameslee@September11,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
 I think that it was very brave of you not to take her back if she caused so much pain... but I can understand that it's really hard to go on without her if you love her still... Thank you for sharing, it was beautiful. All the best, James! LM  "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
this is good writing you have done....it made me sad...i have recently been through a break up along these lines and it is surely hard on both sides....someone was hurting for something liek this to happen...anyway...loved the post....  Julie :) |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, this took a lot of courage to put into the forum. I loved it. I am going through my own little thingy right now, and I hope you make it through as I hope that i do aswell. Great post! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is sad. But why dont you think of how she would feel if you were unfaithful. Do you think that she would take you back? I admire you for doing what you did. If it caused so mauch pain its not worth forgiving her. I also admire you for having the courage to post this. cause it sounds like you are going through a difficult time. Keep up the good work!! ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lots of pain here. I hope the writing helps to heal. Peace. catalinamoon |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
what's most important is how you feel jmlee, If you think that you can work it out do it, but make sure it's for all the right reasons. Not just because it's the easy way. I applaud you for your poem and for being you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Some people take their spouse back and still not forgive them but keep making them relive their mistake over and over again..They really dont forgive them so i think it is best not to take them back at all if one is going to do that..nicely written James  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all...I am no angel...I am not saying look at what my terrible exwife did to me...she must have had her reasons...obviously I was not the right man for her...I wrote this poem to reflect my frustrations...there are no winners when Love goes bad...I could not take her back because my heart cannot live without Love and now that I have not taken her back I miss her and the companionship that we shared. But that journey has ended and it is a lonely world inbetween. The loneliness I am talking about is not being alone...it is being with many and unable to find someone special...I want to meet the woman that needs me...and she tells me that...and her actions reflect that...James |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
oh i really feel you on this poem on a personal level....it reminds me of one of the cleverest jokes life will sometimes play on us....excellent job.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate your comments summer...James |
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