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Dark Poetry #2

Fear

BoyToy
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 2000-09-08 10:49 PM

Imprisoned in a world of hate
here I sit and contemplate,
What makes me tick
what makes me go

I look at the body at my feet
blood pools steaming of heat
empty eyes stare at the moon
I sit above relishing the gloom

I figure this is my purpose
to kill and kill again
no reason to ask why,
alone I commit my sin

The compulsion drives me
it provides me the key
it answers the question why I am here
simply to spread terror and fear

A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-09-09 12:18 PM

Yikes! I'm gonna go and hide

Well written!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-09-10 06:58 AM

Hey BoyToy are you and Chucky going to be friends.Scary poem.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

3 posted 2006-04-08 11:56 PM

I’m Sorry I know no one is going to read this but it said you would be notified of replies so here I am hoping you will reply to me, but knowing you won’t because this is a closed space.
The reason I’m doing this is because I though you were this guy. But you’re most likely not so I’m sounding so stupid right now. Even if I do sound stupid I hope you will reply to me.

But I like your poem it’s really cool

*leah

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