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Moonlight Potion |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Embers smoulder in the night fueling passions from within rising tides within the ocean intoxicated by moonlight potion The voice of the wind whispers of sweet lust seducing like a tigress upon the earths crust Beneath sheets of moonlight and the cloak of the dark dark shadows slither igniting embers to spark Lips quiver in the heat of the night enjoying the potion of pale moonlight |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful words, beautiful imagery, the whole poem a sensation potion for the mind!  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
the words are a delight upon the lips..bravo. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Isis and Pegasus. Im happy you enjoyed. [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmmm.... "seducing like a tigress" Excellent! Like the potion of pale moonlight. Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
mmm...this is nice!! and love the title! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey, this is very lovely I loved the title too! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much, Lm, Poutprincess and Tara thank you for stopping by. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Lips quiver in the heat of the night" eagerly embracing romantic delight.. Sorry... quivering lips set my desires into motion...James |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice. i get an intoxicated feeling just reading it. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sorry for not responding sooner jmlee and jannel..just happened to notice your very nice responses.Thank you |
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