she's my chicago winters that almost here

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eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-09-08 05:43 PM

Woman of many winters and few springs
         the step of the time already left in you
         its irrefutable print
         the summer already left with your adorable youth
         the sun already doesn't rollick with your shade like before
         stars no longer dance in the sky
         and the moonlight doesn´t illuminate your autumnal figure

         Woman of many winters and few springs
         already the raindrops that caressed kindly
         your sculptural figure and sweetened your angelical face;
         Today they are already only memories that live in your soul
         transformed into storms of solitudes.

         Woman of many winters and few springs
         You were the graceful happiness of the street summer
         with flavor of freedom and fleeting loves.
         Today in the autumn of your life
         still waits at the sunset
         with the look lost in the infinite
         for who promised you the heaven
         in a lustful night of summer
         and left in the morning.

         Woman of many winters and few springs
         Please!!
         don't wait more for who never will arrive
         in the autumn of your life.
         because when he went away, leaving you
         not only stole your heart but he took away your joy
         and only a memory he left you
         the sad smile of the sad-eyed girl
         who every afternoon accompanies you to the pier.

         Woman of many winters and few springs
         real life is this way.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-08 07:26 PM

Good poem!!! Winters in Chicago arent that bad. At least it wasnt that bad this year except for the fact that we had snow in April. Where do you stay in Chicago???I know thats not what the poem is about but the title with Chicago in it caught my eye.

Im near Midway Airport.< !signature-->

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-08-2000).]

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2000-09-08 08:07 PM

what a great read..and good advice too.. this is a well written piece. making me a little jealous..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-09-09 12:27 PM

*sniff* Woah! This is truly a tremendous piece of writing!

It says soooo much... thanks for sharing. Take care!
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

4 posted 2000-09-09 01:34 PM

incredibly beautiful.
i too am jealous ...
wow.
-shira

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

5 posted 2000-09-10 09:45 PM

nice. seems very inspired. and inspiring.

jann elizabeth

Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
Devil lover, time awaits you
Now the party's over
You're on your own

-the eels

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