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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-09-08 04:07 PM


I'm cold tonight
and need an arm
around my shoulder

I'm cold tonight
and need someone
by my side

I'm cold tonight
and need some words
to keep me warm

To make me smile
and grow inside

love, to all! Virgin Suïcide



I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-08 05:06 PM


One day Virgin you are gonna meet someone that will do all this plus more for you...And I wish you the best of luck trying to find that one person!!!

Hey did you get my ICQ earlier???Cause I dont think that it went through.


~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-08 05:10 PM


Hey Virgin
If you find an arm, can you give me the other? And few words... common...  
We all need it, good luck in finding yours!
Take Care!

"Did I ask too much?
More than a lot
You gave me nothing
Now it's all I got..."
U2/One

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-09-09 12:56 PM


Nice poem!    Understand the cold very well!  And isn't it amazing how words can make you feel warm... even if you're all frozen inside... written well!  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
4 posted 2000-09-09 03:37 PM


Very cool poem. I know the cold thing....somethimes you just wish you had someone....(which you do...he's just away for now...me on the other hand...)

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
5 posted 2000-09-10 05:45 AM


ERIN: THaNK you!!! yeah, I hope I will find someone who can actually BE there.... and I think I got it, but my ICQ was kinda buggin me, he didn't want to send any msg...dammit...  

LM: uhm...dunno about it yet  

taramw: THaNK you! And hope you'll be warm too soon!!

darkstar: yeah, he's away...but you got someone around...JUST ASK HIM!!!!!!!  dammit! AND HE WILL!!!!!!!!

love, Virgin Suïcide...


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

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