»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
Discontent
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
Discontent |
|
|
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
It is to hatred I commit In this world so full of #@%! The quest for love is what I quit I've failed the test this I admit It is my love that you did slough Because it was not good enough You act as if you are so tough But who will be there when times get rough How dare you sit and patronize me False-hearted love is all I see Nothing's all that you will be So it's from you that I break free For my heart you do not care Of that fact I am aware You sit in judgement and you stare At me now with plastic air I pity you your empty soul Because one day you'll pay the toll With two faced love my heart you stole But now in life alone you'll stroll It's so sad you'll never learn From all the hearts and souls you burn And all the love that you spurn Will not be there come your turn All the feelings cast aside Suffer in your foolish pride I care not now for times you've cried Because you did nothing while I died Now it's my heart that I lament After all the time and love I sent To you so little is what it meant I'm left with only discontent G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
||
| © Copyright 2000 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Sadness breeds anger Hurt breeds hate This is merly a refliction Of that state Please forgive the bad word in this piece. It was the only one that fits. Other than that I hope you all like this.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
||
|
darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I liked it a lot... Dark Star |
||
|
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
No pent up agression here...LOL! Well, maybe just a little, BUT I'M FEELING MUCH BETTER NOW...HEHE!!! Dakrstar: Once again, thank you! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
||
|
Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
plastic air... that is quite an interesting thought...that just really caught my attention |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a sad lament hon, I too can relate at times.. But hon we don't do asterisks instead of a swear word, that is a nono in the forum guidelines. I can think of a few things that would still fit, so please can you change it for little ol' me??? We'd appreciate it.. Well written. Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
||
|
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Jannel: I'm glad you liked that thought...TANKS PANKY!!! Isis: I know I broke the rules with this and I'm sorry. I tried to fix it but was stopped because it's been over 48 hours sense it was first posted and now I think it was better the original way. So if you need to remove this I'll understand and won't be mad. And thanks for your other comment. Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
