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Dark Poetry #2

Tis the strike

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-23 02:53 AM

written while i was going through a bad storm writing in candle light.

Tis the blitz
The strike of it i fear
It downs things down to the ground
Here and all around with a warning sound.

Now the storms over and
We morn but rest easy your soul's
Under the ground resting like the storm.

P.S see if you can figure out what i mean by the storm resting under the ground. hehe it's the rain socking in to the ground. and sorry about the spelling but it's three in the morning.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-06-23 02:54 PM

i will never tire of your style, typos and all!!! 3 in the morning is my fave time of day. and i feel what you speak of under the ground is what you and i shared in emails. i know you miss her, boo. i am sending hugs to you.

forever,
kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2000-06-23 03:25 PM

Written by candle light? Hey, I know how that is. I hate it when the power goes out and I have to sit here writing on my computer in the dark. (Just kidding...although I do have a UPS system).
This was a fun poem for me.....Hardrock

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