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one lovely WOMAN'S eyes
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one lovely WOMAN'S eyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
one lovely WOMAN'S eyes many WOMEN come and go within the desires my heart seeks to know. Try my best to let them in to be my soulmate or my friend. Know too many on the fringe would give my heart to know the intimate feelings one WOMAN'S HEART could show. Perhaps if she would let me in I could be her truest friend. From my heart this humble cry... "I would appreciate the opportunity to live and give and die... within ONE LOVELY WOMAN'S EYES." Jameslee@September03,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, would not we all my friend. . . would not we all. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven thank you for reading and the nice response...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This poem says so much James, and you have penned it perfectly. Oh, if only Toronto weren't so far.......  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Love is often a search for the right guy/girl. It can take from a few moments to a few millenia, but no matter what we always find it. --Little Girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marina someday in the near future they will create passion flight...and we can send ourselves to someone we care for by email...say for the weekend...and we can be back on Monday ready to go to work. Of course this technology is already in the hands of the major airlines and they will make sure we never find out about it or they would go broke flying those big birds. Thank you Little girl and if you don't mind I'll go for the few minutes deal...and I do think I have found it...more on that later...James |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I really believe that this could happen. I am taking it as you want that one person who's eyes you can look in at any given time and still see that sparkle. No matter when or how you look at them. As if you want to be settled with one person that you will cherish your life with. Well I think that is common sense, but that is the way that I am taking the poem. I know I cant wait for that day for me. Except with the guy of my dreams. You expressed yourself well. You seem to know what you want out of life. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
this was very sensitive...and left warm feelings...thank you for sharing such a beautiful thought ~~smiles Maureen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful James..loved it..  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Erin, Maureen, and Victoria for the nice words... Yes Erin I am talking about falling in Love...I am talking about a special woman trusting me and letting me in...I am talking about a mutual attraction...I am talking about an eternal Love that keeps giving and keeps growing...I believe that I have just begun to live my dream...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well James the Goddess Isis blesses this upcoming union, and hopes with all her heart that this time you find more than just 'glimpses'. Isis is happy for you hon  Beautiful work btw *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
james oh my friend i feel your pain. this is how i feel about my (ex) wanda. lovers have come and lovers will go but she is the only one to have my soul. she was this one woman in my life. and i dont think i will ever have her back =( great work my friend Jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wow!!! loving this poem a lot. Simple but really emotional. One of the nicest things someone could tell a girl. Keep writing adn thanks for sharing this poem. I really like it a lot I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
AH James, how lovely. You must read this to her. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Isis, Jesse, aicre, and catalinamoon for the warm responses. I do share my poetry with every willing ear and every desiring eye...James |
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