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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I really don't want to really don't But I just can't help it help it at all I really don't want it want it this way But I just can't get get those feelings away I really don't want this crying out loud But I just can't help it help feeling left out I really don't want to be all alone But I just can't keep keep you with me I'll always be left over here And you shall be gone away from my tears Damn, this just came up in like 5 min. or so.... Weird... love to all! Virgin Suïcide "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hmz, I just read it over...and it sux..... love... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I usually don't like 5 minute poems cause I'm thinking how the heck can she write that in 5 and it takes me ten...ha...ha.. actually I have written a poem in 10 but that was just the basic idea or outline and then I had to go back and work with it for a while...and a while could be ten more minutes or an hour or so...sometimes I write parts of a poem and let it lay for weeks and pull it out later when I have the proper inspiration to edit or add or subtract...James |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
There are minute steaks, why not 5 minute poems..when it flows, it flows..don't question it, just go with it..This is a delightful piece and doesn't .....you know, what you said..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thnx....I was just in a sort of rhymie mood or so...dunno...hehe, finally a poem from me that actually rhymes a bit...don't have that often... But I'll try to take some more time for other poems! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I don't think it sucked at all!  Enjoyed this one of yours immensely!! Loved ya last line "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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