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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
folded up in a closet tear-stained cheeks delicate eyelashes brushing against my mind eyes wide with fear little girl i whisper dont despair please our lips are trembling faces falling please ill make it all okay i promise all okay promise i... me? |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Wow...I really liked it. Dark Star |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what's behind the door?? this one made me think. . . very good. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
shira, this poem really shows your several faces. I recognise that little one. it's just beautifully sad how you describe things. Hope you can get out of the closet one day. josh. |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Silentsky, Very interesting. So many people in such a small place! I liked it a lot. Vince "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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