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Because Our Love was True: Post 2,998
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Because Our Love was True: Post 2,998 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Because our love was true I thought it would never end I thought I'd always be with you And never have a broken heart to mend Ours was a love pure and right That burned like a flame Guiding my days and brightening my nights My life would never be the same But now my broken heart won't mend You took your flame from my view I thought it would never end Because our love was true ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This breaks my heart to read this. Hugs to you, my friend. Beautifully written, but ever so sad Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven so sad, it may have been true love for you but it obviously wasn't for her.. But it still hurts all the same. Another soul song as usual my friend, great work!!  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes love is ecstasy when it begins and pain and sorrow as it seeks its end...James |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
It's so sad when love ends for one person but not for the other, and usually the situation is such... ((hugs)) Hope you'll get over it soon and start a new chapter. Take care! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*sigh* no one likes to know that true love can end..but i guess people grow and change and sometimes love cant keep up....i hope you heal soon. beautiful but sad poem. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
So sad when only one side believes that the love is true...your poem (you know) speaks volumes to me and now I feel like crying. For you, for me...the whole world it seems like these days. Emotionally intense writing, Sven. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I have re-read this poem twice and I am still speachless...Thanks for sharing!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, thank you. . . I didn't mean to! Isis, it's always that way isn't it?? Thank you my friend. . . James, why is it like that? The ultimate poetic question. . . thank you. . . LM, thank you for your thoughts. . . Dawn, it is sad when you think that you have it all. . . and then you don't. . . thank you for reading. . . sonjes, I know. . . but it's not always going to be that way. . . there is a sunrise. . . keep believing that. . . Beth, thank you so much!! Glad that you enjoyed. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
"only love can break a heart, only love can mend it again" i hope this was just writing, but if not, either way it was heartfelt.... nicely done~~ *S* bj ~the breath, a mystery of it's own ~~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
So sad how often we find ourselves piecing our shattered hearts back together. I'm so sorry that you're feeling this way. I hope you can pick your heart up off the floor and move on! Nicely written poem!! ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
boji, thanks for the song, and for the thoughts. . . Star, thank you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, If it was meant to be, it will be. If not, then you are probably better off. Nice poem. Well written. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Sven......I know exactly how this feels, but how you expressed it so vividly, that's what made it so real in it's picture of pain of the human heart. I am the better for you sharing your gift, and feel for you in your pain. I think you might live near me??? Seen your profile one time.....Illinois??? Great work, I enjoyed it! Lynne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your heart my friend, I think has been cracked but not broken. To be in love.....a true love, would mean one must feel the same...... A great expression of emotion here Sven. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LW, perhaps I am. . . thank you my friend. . . Illusion, thank you for reading, I'm sorry that you know how this feels. . . I wouldn't wish it on anyone. . . and you might want to take another look at my profile. . . Marina, thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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