Dark Poetry #2 |
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People |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA ![]() |
People who I dislike, People Who I like, People Who I adore, People Who I envy, People Who I cherish, People Who I Ignore, What makes them what they are is there soul, A judgement by each other does not justify the goodness of soul, To determine the true meaning of someone’s soul, people need to be honest, Honest to other people and honest to themselves, The word people brings many words on my mind, Pity, Poor, Pleasure... and so on, People are who they are, You cannot change what is meant to be left alone, You can only watch it while it happens, hoping for the best, Hoping is another word for wanting it, Its just sounds better to us, We hope to have a million dollars, We hope we do not die, We hope we do not get aids, Why not just say, I want million dollars, I do not want to die, I do not want to get aids, Is it so hard to say that? Yes, yes it is, We are constantly judged, judge by none but one another, Every decision is crucial to us, When I say us, I mean People, People are poets, People wish to be in paradise People hate poverty All I have to say to everyone including myself is grow up, wake up, open up your eyes, your soul and your heart, Love is everywhere for us to grab, There is also no shortage for truth either. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes this is also true people need to grab and not just wait for it to come cause they'll be waiting a long time for that. as always great work here. keep it up and i'll try to keep up with you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you for your inspiration Jeremiah |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
well nox... you got right to the point on this one. i must say... most clearest message i have ever seen you convey. usually you got me trying to figure out what you are saying thru fire and brimstone!!! loved this!! way to vent. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Good job at expressing what you see happenning around you in this world..Theres is alot to be mended... The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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